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This is just a bunch of high pitched noises followed by some lower pitch noises that make no sense in a composition together. Can't really say much else. Look up tutorials and try to get better.

Also, "dubstep is hard to do in LMMS so don't rate low if it sounds bad and cringy". Everybody will rate something low if it sounds bad and cringy. If even you are accepting that it sounds bad and cringy then why did you upload it in the first place?

Also (again), GD icon. I don't really have to explain myself here.

Hope you can get better at making music. If LMMS is bad for making dubstep then don't use it to make dubstep.

This is much better than the original, but the mixing is wayy off. You need to stop things from clipping, especially in the drop, and EQ pretty much everything. Aside from that its actually pretty good.

That high pitched synth during the drop is way too prominent. I mean I like it, but it hurts my ears. And trust me when I say its not my volume. It also drowns out the awesome background synth you have going on (the one acting as a bass line) and the clap is almost non-existent. This makes the drop feel really empty.

Another little nit-pick is that there is not much variation. The drops are exactly the same, same melody throughout. Not too much of an issue since its pretty catchy though.

Intro and outro are very well done. I like that ticking you have that gets progressively faster and then introduces the main melody. The piano sound is nice but it might be a bit better with some more reverb (though that is something that others may not like).

Only improvement I can really suggest is mix that high pitched synth better. I don't know what software you use, but I use FL Studio 12 and would lower the high end EQ in the mixer by a fairly small amount. If that doesn't help then I'm sure youtube could do the trcik - just search up how to mix/master in whatever program you use.

Hope this helps you!

OskarTopp responds:

Thank you for that. I am mixing and mastering my High pitched synths a lot. I Think it sounds good that's just my opinion. I just moved the melody three notes down hope it helps. But Thank you

The sounds need improving, but you have some good and varied melodies in there. Also, why is this tagged under Drum N Bass? It doesn't have any signature DnB drums in it, nor is it high bpm.

AlphaStormMusic responds:

I wasn't actually sure what to put this under, so I put it under drum and bass.

You somehow made this catchier. I hate the original, but I really seem to like this version. Well done!

Love it! I know I worked on it a bit, but barely. You deserve most of the credit. Sorry I wasn't around to help much, skype was and still is broken (I can only access it via firefox...)

Tennon responds:

Lol its ok. I legit thought you were dead .-.

I don't think this is dubstep at all, but that doesn't mean its bad. I won't judge it as dubstep, because I feel that its more like slowed down drum and bass.

The melodies you used are good, but repetitive. The "drop" is not a drop, just a key change, but it sounds decent apart from the obnoxious "Drop the bass" sample. Not really much to say other than that. I also really like that snare for some reason :)

You used my two favourite synths, nexus and harmor, and used them to make drum and bass, my favourite genre. I love you and this track <3

5TanLey responds:

thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Never really listened to any of your stuff before, aside from allure (which is awesome btw). Anyway, I really regret not having listened to much of you because this track is great, I like everything about it. The piano adds a sort of mysterious atmosphere in, along with the bells too, which is a sort of contrast to the rest of the song, which is more of something that makes you want to get up and jump about!

Looking forward to seeing more of you!

Lockyn responds:

Thank you man, appreciate the kind words! Thanks for coming to take a look at my other tracks :)

I think you went way too overboard with the wubs and hardly any of them fit. The "pitch climber" (idk) is repeated too soon and is also annoying.

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