Lubloom's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Volt]

Never really listened to any of your stuff before, aside from allure (which is awesome btw). Anyway, I really regret not having listened to much of you because this track is great, I like everything about it. The piano adds a sort of mysterious atmosphere in, along with the bells too, which is a sort of contrast to the rest of the song, which is more of something that makes you want to get up and jump about!

Looking forward to seeing more of you!

Lockyn responds:

Thank you man, appreciate the kind words! Thanks for coming to take a look at my other tracks :)

[Zyzyx - Evolve]

Is this seriously your first drum and bass track? I think you've found a new talent, this was awesome! Looking forward to seeing more of this from you.

DJ-Zyzyx responds:

Thanks mate :DD

[DEMON SLAYER - Preview]

Unlucky with the loss of the files mate, would've been cool to see the finished version.

Some more mastering (or just improvements to the sounds in the synths themselves) could have been done as they sound a little bit loud and very slightly annoying throughout.

Doublechindoge7 responds:

I will still be finishing this song, with any major project I make I make an MP3 file every single time it reaches the next "Stage" of development. This was at stage 3, so I can use audio clips of this and its previous versions combined with new sounds to finish it. However, this restricts mastering, lowers audio quality and makes my job A LOT harder...

[SharkBite - On Top of the World (Geometry Dash Cut)]

It's pretty catchy to be honest, but there are a some mixing issues that you could fix. The wobble bass comes in too strong as well, so maybe a fade there would be nice, but other than its abrupt start I like that wobble!

Stop putting Geometry Dash cut into the title just to make it more popular. That's pretty much the equivalent of having clickbait titles and thumbnails on youtube. I understand why you'd want to, but you really don't need too man.

TheSharkBite responds:

I'd believe you, but I sort of do need to. I won't anymore though...

[The Ark]

Dude, that is low. The rules specifically say that you can only upload your own work to this site, so I feel that you should be punished. I had a suspicion that they were copied when you removed all your past songs. You pretty much gained 20-ish fans for uploading other pieces of work, and you should be ashamed of yourself.

Anyway, the song's not bad but it's not good either. The wubs are okay yet unfitting, but the rest doesn't sound amazing. The snare drum is pretty terrible for dubstep in my opinion. You will get better though, just do some more experimenting and make sure you don't just copy other peoples work!

TheDecode responds:

Yeah :)

[Zyzyx - Shapes]

Very noice, almost perfect. I just wish the ending had some sub-bass to give it a better, more punchy feel. Other than that I love it. Awesome!

DJ-Zyzyx responds:

It has a sub, just needs more mids. Without mids the bass doesn't sound as strong... and I kinda messed up that way xD

[~AZ~ Chronicles]

Pretty good, despite the default FL drums. And you used a lot of nexus2 presets, but I do the same so I can't really bash you for that since they work anyway.
Lots of interesting melodies in here, and they all fit well with the rest. Well Done!

AdamCorporation responds:

Thank you! :D

[Halsey - Colors (Chael Remix)]

Nicely done, dude. Can't really review it because I don't have anything to criticize. This had better get featured. Please do more like this!

Falsesouth responds:

I really hope so!! Thanks :D

I hope I can make more like this. Most of my recent tracks/remixes came straight out of my emotions.

Glad to have you back on board as a follower xD

[Applesnitch - Cancer [Original Mix]]

This was rather meh. You have a bass going on constantly that would work much better if it was exclusive to a specific section of the song, and that same bass pretty much cancels out everything apart from the kick and the high pitched noise (which is rather annoying) The drop isn't the best dubstep drop since it feels like just a mass of sound being thrown at your face.

That said, I can safely say this isn't terrible. I can see what you were trying to do with the sounds, and it somewhat worked but I think that it needs more work.

My advice would be have more variation in the track and also remaster that bass to stop it drowning everything out.

Applesnitch responds:

Yeah, the thing about this album is that I was running out of time. I couldn't get everything to work out the way I wanted to but I can assure you that I'm gonna go make and remake some of these songs!

[Chael - Nightmare]

Woah dude, this is awesome. Not like your style at all, and that's probably the best thing about it, shows that you can vary a lot in what you do and still be good at it.

Not really much to say apart from awesome job!

Falsesouth responds:

Haha, thank you so much :D

I am glad you enjoyed it!!